Monday, 18 September 2017

Script - Third Draft

After a while, I did another revision of my script. Other than a few touch ups, I mainly wanted to focus on the characters and flesh them out a bit more in the short space of time. I also added a title page.


1 comment:

  1. There are some really nice touches here and the humour is very clever. Have you tried reading through it to check timings and gauge how long your film will be?

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