Divine Intervention - Draft 3

Just made some minor tweaks to the volume and pacing

Plumtree

Stephen, this second draft looks really good. The extra footage of the scenes in the corridor really add to the 'Mockumentary' style you are going for. I agree that the background 'chatter' at the start could do with being a bit quieter but it does add to the realism of the office scene.

Divine Intervention - Draft 2