Sunday, 15 April 2018

Evaluation - Question 4

Made with Padlet

Evaluation - Question 3



I'm fairly happy with the response that I got from my audience feedback. My audience found the film humorous and got a lot of enjoyment out of it - even noticing some of the smaller details I included - however they did raise some issues with the film that I was aware of. For example, the camera and audio aren't nearly at the quality that I would have hoped but at the same time but I feel that this almost works with the documentary style of shooting. I will just need to make sure that I have much better equipment for the next project I work on.

Wednesday, 28 February 2018

Magazine Review - Draft 2

Amended some of the wording and grammatical errors as well as adding a byline.


Plumtree

Stephen - well done for adding the magazine article. There are a few little typos that need amending, so read through it very carefully and you will spot them. I also think your final statement of it not living up to its full potential needs clarity. Are you saying the film doesn't live up to its potential or the mockumentary style? Have a look and see what you think.

Tuesday, 27 February 2018

Magazine Review - Draft 1

Here is the first draft of my magazine review for a film magazine called 'Microwave Popcorn'


Friday, 23 February 2018

Plumtree

Stephen - I think the film is there now. I really like the addition of the company logo and date stamp; it just finishes off the film and makes it look that bit more professional. The poster too looks good and the continuity with the logo and film title works really well. I was expecting to see the magazine review too so I am disappointed it is not here. Please make sure you post it as a matter of urgency so that we can review it and suggest any necessary alterations.

Friday, 26 January 2018

Plumtree

Stephen, the film is looking really good now and the credits are a good addition, but they seem to end really abruptly. Is there any way to have a final image or text (directed by..and the date stamp) just to finish it off like most other films? Have a think and see what you can do.

Wednesday, 17 January 2018

Divine Intervention - Draft 5



I've added credits to the end so the different aspect ratio makes sense

Tuesday, 9 January 2018

Divine Intervention - Draft 4



Again just minor tweaks to sound levels and colour grading.