Magazine Review - Draft 2

Amended some of the wording and grammatical errors as well as adding a byline.

Plumtree

Stephen - well done for adding the magazine article. There are a few little typos that need amending, so read through it very carefully and you will spot them. I also think your final statement of it not living up to its full potential needs clarity. Are you saying the film doesn't live up to its potential or the mockumentary style? Have a look and see what you think.

Magazine Review - Draft 1

Here is the first draft of my magazine review for a film magazine called 'Microwave Popcorn'

Plumtree

Stephen - I think the film is there now. I really like the addition of the company logo and date stamp; it just finishes off the film and makes it look that bit more professional. The poster too looks good and the continuity with the logo and film title works really well. I was expecting to see the magazine review too so I am disappointed it is not here. Please make sure you post it as a matter of urgency so that we can review it and suggest any necessary alterations.

Divine Intervention - Draft 6

Poster - Draft 2